Another vivid snatch of Joe’s sad life. I am really looking forward to holding the actual book in my hands, rereading it. You nail each chapter—and it ain’t moving. Neither is the reader.
I'm sure a lot of people who read this have had similar issues with their siblings. My girlfriend is quite close with her sisters, and it makes me jealous because I have absolutely no relationship with my brother. It seemed, from the moment I was born, that his sole goal was to torture me.
Another vivid snatch of Joe’s sad life. I am really looking forward to holding the actual book in my hands, rereading it. You nail each chapter—and it ain’t moving. Neither is the reader.
Thanks, Marc! I'm the same way--I need to hold a novel in my hand, feel its pages, crease the spine, watch it crinkle as I progress.
Very well painted. I know what those moments look like and you laid it out very well!
Thanks, Jason.
I'm sure a lot of people who read this have had similar issues with their siblings. My girlfriend is quite close with her sisters, and it makes me jealous because I have absolutely no relationship with my brother. It seemed, from the moment I was born, that his sole goal was to torture me.
The character Rob is based on him.
Intense! Great writing 👍🏼. Shit brother 👎🏼.
Appreciate that, Sarah! I’ll have to agree with you on that one. Much more to come…
This reads like the kind of secret you’re not supposed to tell. Terrific writing.
Thank you so much, Mathew. I suppose the entire novel is like that.
Never had a sibling, but this was an emotive description of brotherly conflict. 🤘🏼
Thank you!
Beautiful and disgusting. I love it 👌
My favorite. Thank you, friend.
brother...
Indeed...